Suzette _ Cantave_ Rough Draft Assignment 7

1. Perform a peer review of the essay posted in the thread directly below yours in this forum.
o Sometimes confusion occurs. If the essay directly below yours already has a review posted, choose and review an essay that does not yet have a review.
o If your draft is the last posted, review the first draft posted.
2. Reply to your peer\’s post in their thread:

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o Share three strengths of the draft essay.
o Share three aspects of the draft essay that could be improved upon before the final submission.
o Respectfully share your opinion on how well you think this draft meets the assignment requirements.
o Open the Peer Review worksheet , type feedback, save it, and attach it to your response in your peer’s thread.
To receive full credit for this assignment, you need to post your rough draft and offer written feedback as well as the peer review worksheet for a peer\’s draft in the discussion forum.
For this discussion forum, you are only required to respond to one peer to receive full credit.

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Peer review reply to peer is well developed and insightful. Peer review responses promote a positive, collaborative environment by offering problem solving ideas, constructive criticisms, and/ or asking meaningful, thoughtful questions. Peer review comments are highly detailed and specific, and worded in such a way that indicates thoughtful consideration of the materials submitted and the student who submitted them. It is highly apparent that peer review comments are aimed at supporting and helping peers be successful.

SAMPLE SOLUTION

Three strengths
There are some aspects that give the analysis of the speech strength. First and foremost, the analysis clearly captures the wishes and aspirations of Obama. In every paragraph, the author has clearly highlighted what the democratic nominee stood for and what he | GET AN EXPERT FOR YOUR ASSIGNMENT | that the author has brought out important aspects that are critical in any analysis of a speech. For instance, the place and date has all been shown in the introductory paragraph. This I believe is critical to any | GET AN EXPERT FOR YOUR ASSIGNMENT |of the setting always helps set the mood of the speech. Lastly, the author has given a convincing conclusion that captures all areas of the essay (Chandra, 2015).
What Needs to Be Improved
Despite the strengths highlighted above, there are other areas that may need improvement before the final submission. First and foremost, there are minor editing…